The threads
around me are
slowly unraveling,
And I’m helpless
to stop the holes
from expanding…
These patches
help the spread
momentarily,
But this fabric
seems not worth
salvaging…
Unraveling
Published
The threads
around me are
slowly unraveling,
And I’m helpless
to stop the holes
from expanding…
These patches
help the spread
momentarily,
But this fabric
seems not worth
salvaging…
Beautifully written Hal….your inner roar….But I’m sure….the self healing will do its magic….Though I know….that takes time….when in this moment, you are sore….but you are spreading wings & your spirits will soon be soared….I see that glow….in your beautiful writings ❤️
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Thank you! ❤️ Those are some beautiful words Navin!!! You could turn that into a poem!
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Well, it’s a little poem, in the form of my comment….only for you ❤️
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Awww thank you Navin ❤️❤️
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❤️❤️
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I was wondering why you weren’t writing but you were… I somehow was not following you?!? 😭🥺😬 Sorry about that!!!
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Haha…no worries at all. And you know what, I was wondering the same about you yesterday….then I found out that I had by mistake disabled the notification…..although I’ve been following you….So now our mysteries have been solved ❤️
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Yeah I was like where the hell did he go?!? Why is he not writing?!?! 😂 Blonde…. I’m blonde.
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I can’t call myself blonde….so I’ve chosen “Homer Simpson”…simply love the x-ray pic of his tiny brain 😂
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Haha!!! 😂😂😂
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Got nominated for the Liebster so I thought about you, I´ll post it later on in the day if you want to check it out, now I´m having to put the fucking work on it….fuck shit 😉 Kidding, not about me being nominated then nominating 5 others, kidding about putting the work. And you should curse less or probably me…
https://yourborderline.wordpress.com/2020/04/18/liebster-blogger-nomination/
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Haha thank you for thinking of me!!!❤️
And hey!! I have a sailors mouth and I’m proud of it! 🙂
But thank you so much!! It’s appreciated!
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Beautiful, as always. The way you weave human emotion into material objects, and develop such depth, is amazing. Beautiful, Hal.
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Thank you so much!!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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These feelings are like 🕯️ candle, we light ourselves and eventually we let the fire kill us, so I suggest to stop the fire and save yourself. Beautiful writing Hal ✨✍️ Have a beautiful day ✨🤗💐
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Thank you Simon! Have a beautiful day too!! Hope it’s sunny wherever you are! ❤️🙂
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Yes, it’s too warm for my skin ☺️😉 I’m from Chennai, India.
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Ohh!!!! It’s probably way warmer there!! I’m from Wisconsin, USA.
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Ohhh! Two of my friends live close to your place one in Torrento and another one in Montreal.✨
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Oh in Canada!!! Yeah I’m pretty close to the Canadian border. 🙂
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Yes you are 😉 close to Canada! Are you doing graveyard shift? You supposed to be sleeping now.🤓
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🙂 I got done with work a few hours ago. Now I’m just pondering life lol
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Have fun 😉👍
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Thanks 🙂 Same to you!!!
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This is so good! Wonderfully penned Hal.
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Thank you!! ❤️
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