I can see you fading away
in my rearview mirror…
With dead leaves
and empty dreams
swirling at your feet.
And as I grip the steering wheel
I can only wonder…
Is this the last lonely image of you
I’ll forever hate to keep?
Rearview
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Keep your eyes open for what lies on the road ahead!
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I am, but sometimes I take a quick glance back. 🙂
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🖤🖤🖤
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❤️❤️❤️
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This one deserves some high praise. You took that rearview idea and really added to it. Loving this part:
“With dead leaves
and empty dreams
swirling at your feet. “
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Aww!! Thank you Benjamin!!
I really thought that part turned out good too 🙂
Thank you!!!!
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It did turn out really well. You’re welcome!
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This is beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Love that second stanza. There’s so much nostalgia in this 🥺❤
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Thank you Wardah ♥️♥️🙂 I think the second stanza made it. 🙂
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I think so too! You’re welcome ❤
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Beautiful ❤️🥰
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Thank you!!!! ♥️
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I love the way you mix an image through the rearview mirror with the perspective of being in the driver’s seat – understanding that being in the driver’s seat really doesn’t provide any more control than being the one left behind
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Thank you so much! Thank you for seeing more just the words ♥️🙂
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